It don’t have a clear idea of where I’m going with this I just know its going to be a romance. Here’s part of the first chapter of my story. I need an opinion? I feel as if its too detailed. I’m 14 (almost 15) BTW.
It was a windy and [...]

me?
sitting on a stool at the kitchen bar, wearing my sisters blue t-shirt, and jeans, on my sister laptop. drinking flat coke, asking this question, playing Sims 2, entering a code on coke rewards with one headphone in from my mp3 player listening to Avril Lavigne waiting for my dad to call me back and [...]