Last night I had a dream that I walked into this living room of a house to find my long-time love interest sitting on a gold-colored sofa with his little sister (who for some reason had black hair with blond highlights instead of her usual brown hair). When I walked into the room the little [...]

It don’t have a clear idea of where I’m going with this I just know its going to be a romance. Here’s part of the first chapter of my story. I need an opinion? I feel as if its too detailed. I’m 14 (almost 15) BTW. It was a windy and gloomy Saturday afternoon. I [...]