and I was passing by, would you let me push up your stool? P.S. sorry better grammar this time.

I was at a bar-type place at the Lester B. Pearson airport in Toronto – and when I took a seat at a bar stool with a coffee – the waiter person said something with nooby grammar like “no coffee up here – only alcoholic beverages”, I then asked “must I purchase an alcoholic beverage [...]

It don’t have a clear idea of where I’m going with this I just know its going to be a romance. Here’s part of the first chapter of my story. I need an opinion? I feel as if its too detailed. I’m 14 (almost 15) BTW. It was a windy and gloomy Saturday afternoon. I [...]