It don’t have a clear idea of where I’m going with this I just know its going to be a romance. Here’s part of the first chapter of my story. I need an opinion? I feel as if its too detailed. I’m 14 (almost 15) BTW.
It was a windy and [...]

its kinda based on my life, but not really, tell me what you think
“Four hundred and ninety nine, five hundred” she sat up, as per usual 500 sit-ups before school, and got up at 6:30 just to do them, from here she would go for a shower, dry her hair, brown waist length, wavy hair, [...]