I woke up happy and gay and skipped to my work desk at dawn to check emails. Suddenly and with only slight warning I was afflicted with a deep sinking feeling in my large intestine and stomach. I clicked to Y/A LGBT and checked my point total and I nearly choked on my english muffin. [...]

It don’t have a clear idea of where I’m going with this I just know its going to be a romance. Here’s part of the first chapter of my story. I need an opinion? I feel as if its too detailed. I’m 14 (almost 15) BTW. It was a windy and gloomy Saturday afternoon. I [...]